I loved the scene at the end ( obviously). I also loved the close up scene of just the ball rolling across the pool table. You timing worked really well also. Good Job!
I like the variation and sped up shots, it went well with the speediness of the music. The only thing is, is it did get kind of repetitive watching the game, you could have added jump cuts in throughout the game to make things flow a bit better.
the video was well edited, I really liked the shot with the cue ball going across the screen and the end scene. The video could have used a wider variety of shots and maybe a stronger focus on the story element.
Awesome punctuation at the end of the character throwing away the trophy. A variety of shots would have helped. I liked the close up of the the cue ball rolling, i wish you did more up close shots from other points of view like that.
I really enjoyed the video as a whole. I liked how you sped up the video to flow with the music. The ending is very clear and concise. I find this video to be simple, yet fun. Overall, great job!
However, for the song being 2 minutes long, you definitely needed to add a wider variety of shots to your music video to make it interesting. It seemed like we were just watching a game of friendly impulse pool, no tournament.
The ending was great, though. Wish there were more of these moments!
Awesome ending to your video! I really liked how the entire video was sped up to match the pace of the song. I especially liked your close up shots of the balls rolling on the pool table. One thing I wish you would have had more of is a variety of shots. I felt like there was a lot of the back and forth shots of the two of you taking your turn that could've been substituted for higher or lower angle shots. Overall, I liked the video!
I like how you made the video fast pace. I really liked the different shots you took of the game. It flowed very nicely and matched your pitch perfectly. Good Job!
The ending was great! I liked the fast pace of the video that stayed consistent throughout. I think it was fun and fit well with the song. However, I think it would have been nice to see a bigger variety of shots, like maybe a wider shot from a distance. I think it would also be good to have some closer shots of the competitors showing emotion and the intensity of this competition.
Fun - the end was great. I liked how there were some color treatments in the tight shots of the table. Also parts where it slowed down, to mix up w the mostly spedup sequence(s). Nice.
I really liked the fast speed duration, I thought it fit the music well. I also liked the close up shot of the white ball passing by. The ending had a nice comedy touch to it. I would have liked to seen some more interaction with one another, more emotions conveyed. Overall great job!
I really liked the concept you guys had for the video, but I feel like the shots themselves were lacking in variety. It felt more like a timelapse than a music video. Maybe that also had something to do with no lyrics? Which is fine, but if there were more angles to choose from, it would've worked a lot better. For example, at the end of the video, when the guy scratched the ball, I feel like if there were closeups of the scratch happening and the guy's reaction to it that would've added some tension. And you could've done that with other parts as well. Maybe there is some trash talk happening between the two, or one of them gets a streak going and the other one is starting to sweat. I liked the fast pace, I think it worked well with the song, but I think the main thing to consider for next time is to get a larger variety of shots. Good job, though!
I loved the scene at the end ( obviously). I also loved the close up scene of just the ball rolling across the pool table. You timing worked really well also. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI thought this was really funny and entertaining. I liked the ending by just throwing the trophy away, that was a nice touch. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like the variation and sped up shots, it went well with the speediness of the music. The only thing is, is it did get kind of repetitive watching the game, you could have added jump cuts in throughout the game to make things flow a bit better.
ReplyDeletethe video was well edited, I really liked the shot with the cue ball going across the screen and the end scene. The video could have used a wider variety of shots and maybe a stronger focus on the story element.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how it was set up to be not at all serious. The use of fast motion fit with both the song and the theme well, too.
ReplyDeleteAwesome punctuation at the end of the character throwing away the trophy. A variety of shots would have helped. I liked the close up of the the cue ball rolling, i wish you did more up close shots from other points of view like that.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the video as a whole. I liked how you sped up the video to flow with the music. The ending is very clear and concise. I find this video to be simple, yet fun. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteYour concept is right on!
ReplyDeleteHowever, for the song being 2 minutes long, you definitely needed to add a wider variety of shots to your music video to make it interesting. It seemed like we were just watching a game of friendly impulse pool, no tournament.
The ending was great, though. Wish there were more of these moments!
Awesome ending to your video! I really liked how the entire video was sped up to match the pace of the song. I especially liked your close up shots of the balls rolling on the pool table. One thing I wish you would have had more of is a variety of shots. I felt like there was a lot of the back and forth shots of the two of you taking your turn that could've been substituted for higher or lower angle shots. Overall, I liked the video!
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the video fast pace. I really liked the different shots you took of the game. It flowed very nicely and matched your pitch perfectly. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteThe ending was great! I liked the fast pace of the video that stayed consistent throughout. I think it was fun and fit well with the song. However, I think it would have been nice to see a bigger variety of shots, like maybe a wider shot from a distance. I think it would also be good to have some closer shots of the competitors showing emotion and the intensity of this competition.
ReplyDeleteFun - the end was great. I liked how there were some color treatments in the tight shots of the table. Also parts where it slowed down, to mix up w the mostly spedup sequence(s). Nice.
ReplyDeleteCool video. I though the concept for your video was pretty interesting. The end scene was really funny.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the fast speed duration, I thought it fit the music well. I also liked the close up shot of the white ball passing by. The ending had a nice comedy touch to it. I would have liked to seen some more interaction with one another, more emotions conveyed. Overall great job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the concept you guys had for the video, but I feel like the shots themselves were lacking in variety. It felt more like a timelapse than a music video. Maybe that also had something to do with no lyrics? Which is fine, but if there were more angles to choose from, it would've worked a lot better. For example, at the end of the video, when the guy scratched the ball, I feel like if there were closeups of the scratch happening and the guy's reaction to it that would've added some tension. And you could've done that with other parts as well. Maybe there is some trash talk happening between the two, or one of them gets a streak going and the other one is starting to sweat. I liked the fast pace, I think it worked well with the song, but I think the main thing to consider for next time is to get a larger variety of shots. Good job, though!
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